Welcome to the kingdom of Alburnium
If the Wizard of Oz swept you away and Narnia enchanted you, then follow the White Road Chronicles for a new kind of adventure.
Illuminated: Book One- begins with a girl in search of the truth.
Alyra, mockingly known as Princess, was captured at an early age by the evil ruler, Darnel, and brought up in the dark land of Racah. Now, at the age of seventeen, she considers herself nothing special. She has no recollection of who she is or where she came from. Her hope of ever finding freedom dims.
Until the messenger arrives. Until he brings to light the meaning behind the medallion she's kept hidden. Until she accepts the blinding truth.
Now she flees for her life.
Alyra’s journey leads her down a narrow road with strange traveling companions. Together, they encounter a kingdom where nothing is what it first seems.
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Illuminated Book 1
Chapter 1
Chapter 1
The rake’s weathered
handle left splinters despite the many callouses covering her palms. The girl
stopped her work a moment to dig one of the larger ones out. Once her hands
were soft and adorned with jewels, her clothing made of the finest silks and
satins. Now she wore stained linen skirts that allowed winter’s biting cold to
chill her bones.
Her choice to walk away from her royal position, and she’d not allow
herself to regret making that choice. Even if she missed her fur coats and soft
bed on days such as this. Oh, and the stunning view of the sun setting behind
the mountain ranges. Her stomach rumbled. She’d not think about the delectable
dishes she and King Darnel, her so-called, not-real-father, used to share.
“Stop right now.” She banged the rake’s prongs against the stone floor.
Even thinking his despicable name sent worse chills down her back than the cold
did. No, she’d not think about what she no longer had. She’d only consider of
the possibility of one day making an escape. Somehow, somewhere, someway, there
was a means to get down the mountain.
She refocused on the task at hand. If Ben, the dungeon master, walked in
on her simply standing around, he might use the switch on her again. The girl
chewed on her bottom lip, forcing her thoughts to not wander. She had to get
back on Ol’ Ben’s good side. Had to.
A beam of morning sunlight filtered in through one of the high windows in
the holding room of the prison. Yes, she had to keep her thoughts on the good.
For now, she was free of her cruel step-father. Or as free as she could get at
the moment. Until she found a way to escape.
At least here, despite the musty odor and dusty air of the
abandoned-stables-turned-prison-cells, she had much more freedom than when she lived
in the lush rooms of the castle. With him.
She continued to
sweep out what were once stalls for horses and other livestock. Now the area was
used to hold new slaves captured from the neighboring towns Darnel’s forces had
overtaken.
Ben insisted she
get every last one cleaned out and ready for the fresh batch of “guests” as he
liked to call them. Just a play on words, far as she was concerned. They were
slaves and nothing less. Poor souls snatched from their homes and dragged here
to help Darnel build his mountain fortress that towered over the city called
Racah.
A fresh breeze
blasted in, ruffling her skirts and sending another freezing chill through her.
A shadow fell across the newly swept floor.
“Hey, love.”
She spun toward
the voice. Tarek, the pesky huntsmen, stood in the doorway. Two pheasants hung
by their legs from a strip of leather tied around his belt. Her eyes narrowed
on him as she wondered if he’d been poaching again. She hadn’t seen him around
in the past few weeks. After their last row, she had begun to think he’d
finally taken her advice to leave her alone.
Guess she was
wrong.
He wore the brown
trousers and gray shirt of the hunters’ uniform. His unfathomable green eyes studied
her as he took in the work she had done. Long, wheat-colored hair fell across
his pinched brows and over the collar of his tunic. She absolutely hated how
her heart always gave a bit of a lurch when she saw him. As if he should matter
to her somehow. Especially when he called her by those infuriating pet names.
“Go away,
hunter, I’m working.”
Like her, he was
a captured slave. Unlike her, he liked living in Racah compared to the poor
town he came from. At least he knew, not only where he came from, but his name
and that he was nineteen summers in age.
Somehow, all her
memories of where she came from, of her home and family, and most annoying, her
name, were completely gone. She guessed her own age to be around seventeen
summers by reasoning that she came to Racah when she was but a very young girl.
For ten years, she’d been called Princess, the only name she had to go by, even
now. According to the marks she made on her cell wall, she’d been working in
the dungeon for almost a year.
She sighed,
thinking too much made her fractured mind hurt.
Oh, once in a
while, she dreamed of a beautiful country with green, rolling hills and of
riding on a man’s shoulder towards a city with white gates. But the dreams were
fleeting like the morning mist that clung to the mountain’s dull, gray peaks.
Tarek pushed
open the door. A wave of cool air swirled in, stirring up dust and flecks of old
hay. “Ben wants you to bring a bucket of water out to the new arrivals. Right
now.”
She glared at
Tarek, wishing he’d leave her alone. Of all the servant girls working the
castle, why did he enjoy spying on her? And mocking her with that sarcastic
nickname. Love. She wasn’t silly
enough to think he meant anything intimate by it. He called most girls that.
But the way he spoke the word to her made her uncomfortable.
After replacing
the tool on its peg, she grabbed her thin cloak before heading outside.
Tarek blocked
the exit, leaning against the frame with his strong arms crossed over his broad
chest. He always smelled of pines and crisp mountain winds. “Seems like this
new group has traveled a long way. Something about them must be important, if
you ask me.” The green of his irises reminded her of the woods he loved so
much.
They also
reminded her of something else. Memories of moonlit trees, a crackling fire,
yet feeling extremely warm, despite the cool mountain air. Her cheeks burned
when those thoughts entered her mind. She quickly pushed them aside.
“I didn’t ask
you.” Why did he think she cared, anyway? She brushed past him and hurried
toward the community pump. The charcoal-gray castle towered hundreds of feet
above, the stone walls blending into the cliffs. Below, nestled amongst the
crags and plateaus, lay Racah, a network of stone buildings and forlorn homes
surrounded by high ramparts and steep peaks.
Tarek trailed
her like a lost puppy. “That Baycock captain, the creepy one they call Bezoar,
brought them in himself.”
She froze
mid-step and almost stumbled. Her breath caught for a second over the disgust
of having to meet the inhuman creature-man today. Grabbing the pail, she set it
under the spout. Fine. She’d take the water down to Ben, then hurry back to
finish cleaning the cell. Her splintered hand burned when she grasped the lever
and pumped.
Tarek leaned
closer until the scent of woods and sweat enveloped her. “And,” he whispered, “your
father is out there.”
The blood in her
veins froze, and she feared he’d notice the blood draining from her face.
Slipping the mask of indifference back in place, she gave the pump two more
good pulls. Darnel was not… nor ever would be… her father!
“Aren’t you
supposed to be out hunting for tonight’s banquet? Or helping your mother in the
kitchen?” He leaned back, and she let her irritation add a bite to her voice. “Wonder
what Darnel would say if he found out you were shirking your own
responsibilities to play messenger boy?”
His face
darkened. Eyes narrowed, he hissed, “King
Darnel. And Ben sent me to fetch you, so that’s what I’m doing.”
“Such a good
little lapdog you are. Why don’t you go fetch a bone or dig a hole and leave me
to my own work?” She took up the pail handle and made her way toward the front
of the building, where Ben would be waiting.
“Princess,
wait!”
Though it was
the only name anyone ever called her, she hated
being called Princess. And Tarek knew it. She spun and glared at him. “Don’t call
me that!”
If he wanted to
play mean, she could play mean. She glanced down at the pheasants on his belt.
The ones he had not turned in to the kitchen, and smirked. “Well, well, well,
look who’s still poaching King
Darnel’s game.”
Poaching was
illegal, but that didn’t stop Tarek from breaking the rules. Nor the other
hunters from what she’d heard. That was one of the things that irritated her
the most: he was always getting on her back for rebelling against Darnel, but
all the while he did the same.
Tarek hesitated
for a moment at her unspoken threat, then he advanced on her, frightening her,
though she tried not to show it. His voice lowered as he jabbed his finger
toward her face. “If you say a word about it to anyone, I’ll tell the king
about your wanderings in the forest.”
Her eyes
widened. He meant her searching for a way out of Racah. Darnel would be furious
if he knew. How did Tarek know? Then her eyes narrowed. He had been spying on her again! It was the only explanation. Sneaky,
traitorous pawn! She’d never understand his devotion to the king. At least he
had not already turned her in.
“Fine,” she
agreed grudgingly. He stood straighter, and she added, “But don’t call me Princess.” She’d told him that again and
again. She doubted he’d listen this time.
But he nodded.
“I won’t.”
She’d see how
long that promise lasted. “And don’t spy on me anymore!” She was always careful
not to be seen searching the tunnels and the woods. What if someone saw Tarek
wandering through the woods on his own and followed him to her?
Tarek rolled his
eyes. He never took her seriously. She spun and continued taking the water to
where Ben waited with the new arrivals.
The weight of
the bucket lightened as Tarek held the handle from the opposite side. She was
surprised at his help. He usually just stood by and watched her work, studying
her with his unreadable, striking green eyes. Judging her, no doubt. She stared
straight ahead, not wanting to see his expression. Not wanting him to see hers.
“Food stores are
getting low,” Tarek’s voice didn’t rise above a whisper. “And servants like my
family are the first to suffer. Our hunting trips get longer and farther out just
to bring in enough meat for the king’s table, much less a banquet like he’s
throwing tonight.”
Her steps slowed,
and his pace matched her stride. She was surprised at his words, surprised at
this rare glimpse of his serious side. She might like him better if he was real
with her more often. Most of the time, she got the impression he was hiding
something from her. When he was not being condescending. She hated that most of
all, when he treated her like she was a child. He may be older than her by two
years, but she had seen things he’d never imagined. Things that would give him
nightmares and change his allegiance in an instant if he knew.
His voice
softened even more, and she had to strain to hear it. “I’m not trying to cause
trouble. I only want to help my family.”
That was one
thing she liked about him: his loyalty to his family. She was jealous of him in
that. She had no family to be loyal to. Darnel was not her father, though he
claimed to be. She glanced at the hunter. “I know. I won’t tell, Tarek.”
He blew out a
long breath and looked relieved. “Thank you.”
A sense of quiet
understanding, even if only momentarily, settled between them as they walked.
When the group came into view, nearly fifty people dressed in ragged clothing,
she paused to gather her wits and steady her panicked thoughts. Just as Tarek
had said, Bezoar and Darnel both attended this group’s arrival. Why?
“He’s not my
father,” she said, gazing at the evil man who had adopted her. Stolen her,
though she knew not from where. She used to call him Poppy at one time, but not
anymore. Now she called him Master and nothing else. He hated her name for him,
but no more than she hated the mocking name he’d given her.
Why was Darnel
wearing his finest attire to greet a bunch of shoddy prisoners? His deep purple
button-down coat was trimmed in silver thread. His polished black boots stopped
just below his knees. Upon his head sat a gaudy silver crown, encrusted with
rubies and emeralds. Was she really the only one who thought he looked
ridiculous?
Tarek’s brow
arched. “What?”
“I wasn’t born
to him.” Her brow furrowed as she tried again to remember her true home, her
true parents. If only she could remember! “I came from another place, like
them. And like you. This isn’t my true home.” She chewed on her lip as she
puzzled once more over her lost past.
When she came
out of her reverie, Tarek was staring at her, his pale brows furrowed in
confusion. “It’s really not so bad here, love.”
Her jaw
clenched, and she forced it to slacken. It wasn’t worth arguing with him again.
She knew he thought she was crazy for living in the dungeons rather than the
castle. He needn’t say it again. She could never make him understand; he would
never realize how evil Darnel was behind his brilliant mind and perfect smile.
Tarek was still
talking. “I’m better off than I used to be. My family now has work, food to
eat, decent shelter. Where we came from, nothing grew. Everyone was starving.”
She held back a
sigh. No, he’d never understand. “Good for you.”
“It’s not just
me, sweetheart.” He brushed away the blond bangs from his face with his free
hand. “Look at them. Their clothes are torn, ragged. Bet they will be glad, as
well, once they see serving the king is the best choice to make.”
Best choice? She
shook her head. Who had a choice in the matter? One either served the king or
they were fed to his pet dragon. Some choice.
She pulled the
bucket from Tarek’s grasp, hoping he’d catch the hint and go away. Thankfully,
he did. When he fell behind, she paused, needing to completely clear her mind. Concentrating
on an old waltzing song she’d heard once, she headed for the gathering.
Bezoar sat upon
his huge black steed. He resembled a living skeleton with grayish skin that
clung to his thin body like a grubby, wet sheet. His long, bony fingers curled
around a leather whip hanging from the saddle horn. Deep-set, yellow eyes
peered from beneath the hood of his gray cloak.
“Sire,” the
Baycock hissed, pointing to a man thrown over the back of a packhorse. “Along
with the herd of livestock we procured from the spoils, this messenger was a
bonus. He’s been spreading his propaganda amongst the towns in the valley
plains. I ordered his life spared for the time being. You did request I bring
such filth to you when we found them.”
Darnel chuckled
with satisfaction. “Yes, that is a bonus, my good captain. Any time we can stop
such liars is indeed fortunate.”
Keeping the
silent melody playing, Princess moved toward the group of people, making sure
the dungeon master, Ben, was between herself and Master Darnel.
Ben wore his
colorful robes, the purple, red, and yellow striped fabric billowing in the breeze.
As she approached, she noticed his hand gripping his cane so tightly his
chestnut-colored skin paled. Though Ben was known to have a terrible temper,
age and arthritis had tamed his angry outbursts. Since she’d taken over many of
his responsibilities, he generally treated her decently so long as she did what
he asked. More importantly, he ignored her long disappearances while she
searched new tunnels for a way of escape.
Ben nodded
toward the chained group and ordered in his deep, throaty voice, “Give ’em
something to drink, girl.”
She cringed,
realizing a quick retreat wouldn’t be possible.
Behind the
messenger’s horse stood a long line of men, women, and children, all thin and
haggard. Their condition most likely resulted from their trek across the barren
land that surrounded the mountains. The castle itself, built into the heart of
the cliffs, was nearly impenetrable, as well as inescapable. Climbing the only
road leading into the city was difficult on horseback… and even more so on
foot. No telling how long they’d gone without food or rest. Bezoar didn’t
concern himself with such human needs.
The prisoners
clustered around her, eager to soothe their dry mouths. They grasped the ladle
greedily with their scraped, bloody hands. Princess avoided looking at the
scared expressions on the children’s dirty faces as they gulped the cool water.
Yet one dark-haired girl, near the age of five, reminded her of the first time
she’d entered this forsaken city.
Had the same
look of terror been in her own eyes?
Princess dared a
glance toward the man strapped on the packhorse. He raised his bruised head. A
long cut streaked down the side of his cheek. With his one not-swollen eye, he
stared at his surroundings in defiance. A gold medallion hung from his neck.
Her breath
caught from her heart lodging in her throat. Forgetting the prisoners, Princess
stepped closer. Water sloshed over the rim of the bucket and onto her feet. She
steadied it, then handed it to the eldest man in the group to hold. She had to
see that pendant.
The messenger’s
face softened when he caught sight of her staring. She quickly turned, unnerved
by the look in his eyes, like he knew exactly what she was thinking.
She risked a
glance at Darnel. He stood tall, a smile plastered on his smooth, handsome
face.
Several
large, brutish men flanked him. They must be the newly appointed governors who
would run the new towns in the Wilds. Rumor had it they were being formally
presented with their new positions at tonight’s banquet.
She shuddered
when one of the governors grinned at her and elbowed the somewhat familiar-looking
trollish-man standing beside him. They whispered something, then broke into
chuckles, all the while never taking their eyes off her.
Princess’
stomach twisted with concern over what they found so humorous. She took the
bucket from the elder and stood to the side, searching Ben’s face to see if
he’d give her the go-ahead to take the group inside. Ben remained a statue.
Darnel motioned
to his men. “Release the messenger so he may stand with our other guests.” His mocking smile widened.
Two soldiers
untied the messenger’s hands and feet and shoved him off the horse headfirst.
He crashed to the ground with a loud groan. Another soldier grabbed the pail
from her and tossed the remaining water in the man’s face. He staggered to his
feet.
His nicely
tailored clothes were bloodied and torn. Dirt caked his beard. The medallion
hung outside his shirt, the symbol of a horn glinting in the morning sun.
The disk was similar,
yet different. What could that mean?
Darnel stepped
closer, scanning the group. His probing stare pierced her, despite all attempts
not to look, her gaze was finally drawn to his cold gray eyes. Hate-filled
laughter sounded inside her head. She closed her eyes and jerked her head away,
trying to think, to fill her mind with the song so she could not hear him.
“How fortunate,”
Darnel addressed the crowd, “for all of you to come at this exciting time in
the history of my empire. We are, this very day, in the process of establishing
new cities and villages in the western frontier. And you fortunate ones are to
be among the first to inhabit them.”
Now she
understood why Bezoar and the governors were there. This group would be forced
to build those cities. Maybe that was the reason behind his increased attacks
on the border lands. He needed more slaves to send out west where he hoped to
increase his kingdom. She gazed toward the rising sun, knowing something
hindered his progress in that direction. Something that plagued her dreams and
pulled at her heartstrings.
“My territory is
expanding. My governors and I,” Darnel waved to the beast-men standing behind
him, “are discussing how best to achieve this. We will be giving you the
privilege to join my quest to revive these lands under my rule.”
Like they’d
really be given a choice? Princess shook her head and muttered, “Working as
slave laborers.” With a gasp, she snapped her mouth closed.
Those standing
around her whispered to each other. They’d heard her! An outburst like that
might result in a lashing. She chewed her lip, daring a glance at Ben, whose
brown eyes narrowed on her in silent warning.
The messenger’s
voice boomed over Darnel’s speech. “Lies!
Do not fall for this imposter’s deception.”
The closest
soldier shoved the butt of his spear into the man’s gut. “Shut up, fool!”
The man fell to
his knees, wheezing. Princess gaped at him. He’d be the dragon’s supper first
if he didn’t quit.
The messenger
took in a hoarse breath and continued, “Resist him! For the army of the true King
is at hand! Do not give in to this evil traitor and his ways! Stand firm while
time remains.” He leaped to his feet and darted out of the soldier’s reach. His
steel-gray eyes scanned the frightened prisoners.
Don’t listen to the ranting of a fool, Daughter! Darnel’s voice rasped in her
head. She flinched and tried once again to control her thoughts. The man
continued talking, but she couldn’t separate his words from Master’s.
“The time of
this evil one’s reign…”
Foolish girl, have you not learned your lesson yet? Darnel stood still as a
statue, an amused expression on his calm face. His cruel eyes flicked in her
direction. I would be prepared to forgive
your insolence and restore you to your rightful position.
Her head pounded
from trying to block his thoughts.
“…his army
approaches as I speak,” continued Messenger.
Return to me, Daughter, rule by my side as I’ve always
intended for you.
The snap of
Bezoar’s whip cracked the air as it tore into the messenger’s back. He flicked
again, and another streak ripped open the man’s shirt and skin. He doubled
over, going down on his knees in the mud.
“Enough,” hissed
Bezoar, drawing his sword from its sheath. “I’ll take care of this, Sire.”
Heart racing,
Princess stepped between the hooded creature and the crouching man. “The dragon
hasn’t been fed in a while.” She met Darnel’s arctic glare. Her mouth went dry
at her own audacity. She’d have been better off staying out of the way and keeping
as quiet as possible. But she couldn’t let them kill the messenger. Not yet.
“The dragon doesn’t care if he’s crazy or not. She’ll eat him all the same.”
The people
standing around her gasped.
The eldest
prisoner, hair white as snow and body thin like branches of a tree, spoke up.
“Perhaps we should listen to the Messenger.” He pointed a dirty finger at
Darnel. “That tyrant took our livelihoods and ordered our town and fields to be
burnt to the ground. Now he says he wants us to help rebuild new ones? Shoulda
left us alone in the first place!”
Darnel closed
the distance between himself and the old man. His hand clamped around the
prisoner’s neck. “I did you a favor. Your homes were crumbling, you had meager
provisions—”
“That’s ’cause
you’ve stripped this land of all that’s good. I remember what it was like. I
remember when we followed King Shay—”
With one quick
movement, a dagger appeared in Darnel’s hand and swept across the man’s neck,
splattering the bystanders in blood. The old man crumpled at Master’s feet, a
red puddle seeped into the ground.
Burning bile
rose in Princess’ throat and she fought back the urge to retch. No matter how
many times she saw pools of blood, she’d still not grown used to the horrid
sight.
Darnel, ignoring
the screams coming from the onlookers, turned to Ben, his gray eyes flashing
with rage. “I’ll expect you to convince them to accept my offer. If there are
others who wish to join the messenger at the dragon’s dinner, do not hesitate
to comply.”
Ben nodded and
motioned for a couple of soldiers to escort the group inside. Bezoar ordered
the body to be dumped in the pit and the Messenger to be taken to the lower
dungeon cells until the dragon’s feeding time.
Princess moved
to follow Ben, but a strong hand clamp down on her arm. Darnel yanked her
around so she faced him.
“It’s your fault
that man died.”
He’d held the dagger, not her! She started to protest, but he cut
off her words.
“Stupid child.
When will you learn that I mean to sever anyone and anything who denies my
authority? If you continue to resist me, I will find other means of curbing your
disloyalty.”
From behind her,
the messenger yelled, “Don’t give in; freedom is at hand!” She turned and watched
as the soldiers dragged him to the dungeon.
Darnel gripped
her chin, his fingers still wet with the old man’s blood. He turned her face
back to him. “You are running out of time, Daughter. My patience with you
wanes.”
“Will you also
feed me to the dragon, Master?” She
spat. His fingers dug deeper into her jaw until she wanted to cry out.
The messenger’s
chants of freedom filled her heart and
emboldened her to stand her ground.
“I’ll not give
you such an easy way out, my dear.” He shoved her away, then he strolled toward
the castle with his governors following. The troll-man kept looking back over
his shoulder at her, smirking.
Princess reached
a trembling hand into the inner pocket she’d sewn into all her skirts and
pulled out a small golden disk which fit perfectly inside her sweaty palm. A
tree was embossed on one side. The other had a flame surrounded by what might
be a burst of light. Her medallion was similar to the messenger’s, yet his had
a horn.
“For freedom!” he continued to chant from the
dungeons. Suddenly, the sound of a loud smack brought complete silence from
within.
There wasn’t
much time. She needed to hurry.
~~*~~
Enjoy the playlist I put together while writing Illuminated:
1. Kate Perry -Wide Awake
2. Coldplay - Viva La Vida
3. Jason Gray - Remind Me Who I Am
4. Adiemus - Hymn and Elegia
5. Phillip Phillips - Home
6. IZ, Israel Kamakawiwo -Over the Rainbow / What a wonderful World
7. Fun - Some Nights (Clean version)
8. Kelly Clarkson - Dark Side
9. Kari Jobe - We Are
10. Landon Pigg & Lucy Schwartz - Darling I Do
11. Jason Mraz - I Wont Give Up
12. Tenth Avenue North - By Your Side
13. U2- Where The Streets Have No Name
14. Big Daddy Weave - Redeemed
15. Casting Crowns - City on the Hill
1. Kate Perry -Wide Awake
2. Coldplay - Viva La Vida
3. Jason Gray - Remind Me Who I Am
4. Adiemus - Hymn and Elegia
5. Phillip Phillips - Home
6. IZ, Israel Kamakawiwo -Over the Rainbow / What a wonderful World
7. Fun - Some Nights (Clean version)
8. Kelly Clarkson - Dark Side
9. Kari Jobe - We Are
10. Landon Pigg & Lucy Schwartz - Darling I Do
11. Jason Mraz - I Wont Give Up
12. Tenth Avenue North - By Your Side
13. U2- Where The Streets Have No Name
14. Big Daddy Weave - Redeemed
15. Casting Crowns - City on the Hill
Are you up for the journey?
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2 comments:
Just finished Illuminated!!!! So good! Can't wait for the next book in this series....
Thank you for stopping by and commenting. Really glad you liked Alyra's journey. I'm working hard on the next book and hope to have it out before summer break.
Glad you enjoyed the journey! Praying blessings on yours.
Jackie
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